Feedback for presentation of treatments

Here is the feedback we received in class today for the presentation of everywhere and 1234

Everywhere by Michelle Branch:

1.

• Obvious concept
• Band?
• Like the idea - approval?
• locations?

2.

• I like the dream idea
• Camera shots should be effective
• How will you get water dripping from the celling?
• Writing on the wall will be effective
• I like the first ending better (all a dream)
• Sounds like it will be a very effective video.
• Good ideas guys.

3.

• Good location
• Nice story plot!
• How you do water effect?
• Cool interest in editing (fast pace)
• Sound calm and relaxed get some good shots with that idea

4.

• Good idea
• Where will you film?

5.

• How will the water drop from the ceiling?
• I like Elliott's idea for the second half

6.

• Good concepts
• water drops? A bit typical
• The Master (dr. who) nice touch!
• Prefer 1st ending
• Bus filming?

7.

• I like the idea of the two different story lines.
• Good idea having two ideas for the song.

8.

• Good idea - performance - dream
• Canvas idea is amazing.
• Water idea maybe difficult
• Imagery is good
• multiple endings

9.

• Performance & story mix is good
• Story is good
• Linking lyrics with video

10.

• Good idea of the dream
• Canvas - Brilliant
• I like the trickery idea.

Answer to questions:

1. Elliot has friends who play instruments

and for the stage we will use either Long Road sixth form college's stage (the hall) or the performance room in Coleridge. For her room we will use any possibility. For the busy street we might film near the Grafton Centre or near Grand Arcade in Cambridge.

2. We will use a watering can or something similar. We won't show the celling just the floor and the room and water will fall on it from above.

1 2 3 4 by Feist:

1.

• I don't understand the switching idea very much.
• Static - nice idea

2.

• Difficult lip sync
• Placement might be difficult
• Band performance is good idea

3.

• A quite detailed idea - I like the idea of the changing locations.
• What sort of costumes will be used?

4.

• I don't understand
• What locations?

5.

• Like the concept

7.

• 1st idea is better.

8.

• Cleat what you want it to look like
• Might get a bit repetitive
• Band performance. good idea, but where would you get the equipment from?
• I like the idea of switching the location

9.

• Boy? Girl?
• Where will you find the band?
• locations?