roughcut 3 structure

Today I carried on editing my music video and made the basic outline/structure of the video. I will edit the specific shots on Friday. Here is the video:

'EVERYWHERE' ROUGH CUT 3 sven from cmdiploma on Vimeo.

I will edit some more shots of Angelica destroying/painting over the 'I'm not alone' canvas in the middle of the video, because at the moment there is just too much band performance in the middle of the video. I find that the structure is okay a the moment but I need to make the certain shots more interesting with effects or movement or something else. It seems to me that it is a bit too dull at the moment.