Strengths:
- I like the start of the 'Painting' bit.
- I like the opening with the stage curtains opening.
- Build up tension with painting, Performance is convincing, opening on stage.
- great cuts, great footage.
- Smooth cuts + variety of shots, good use of lighting.
- good shots.
- shot and camera movement, lighting.
- I like how he uses quick shots in between the painting and the performance, shots are nice.
- The painting 'I'm not alone' is really cool.
- Nice use of cut-aways, lots of varied and interesting shots used, good lipsynching, I like how the footage goes out of focus at the beginning.
- Fade transition from stage to Liam, usage of high angle shot of Angelica.
- mise-en-scene.
- Good lighting.
- The performances are convincing.
- Good lipsynch, lighting.
Weaknesses:
- Could have more shots from different set ups.
- Brought the band performance in too soon.
- a 30 seconds add effect or something make camera look less shaky
- closeups.
- drummer looks lost.
- lipsync needs tweaking.
- drummer looks lost.
- lip syncing.
- Maybe some use of lighting cutaways.
- We don't find out what she's painting. Will this come later?
- using three out of four locations straight away, should slow down.
- Cutting on a shots only half on Angelica, and shorting a shot with her laughing.
- performer.
- shots to ground at 0:32 needs to be cut sooner.
- need to sort out drummer performance.
- Drummer needs to be synced in fine or something.
- Use variety of footage.
- add more shots.
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